I think I’m fighting this chapter way too much. What I thought was going to be a few hours’ work has taken me all day and I’m still not done.
The fact I’m catching a cold definitely doesn’t help.
May need to catch my breath and take a fresh look at things tomorrow.
How can a simple kiss between two characters cause so much trouble?
Can I just slap the main character on the back of the head and yell, “Kiss her already!”